Today I did a blog post about autumn leaves with one of my teachers Mrs Fletcher.
We went outside to go and look at the yellow and brown leaves. Then we went inside and and started writing. The thing that I liked about the leaf writing was that I got to go outside and have fun in the leaves. The thing that I didn't like about the leaf writing was that it was hard to find out what I was going to do like if I was going to do a poem or a normal writing about autumn leaves. The thing that I found interesting about the leaf writing was that I got to look at all of the golden leaves and see all of the words that describe autumn leaves. So here is my work.
Kia ora Grace, I’m Izaiah from Paihia in Te Ngahere. I really like your blog post about the Autumn leaves. I like the way you presented your work because it’s really clear to read and understand. I also liked the way you explained what you were learning about. Well, keep up the good work and keep posting. Bye.
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