Explanation Writing T4

This is my explanation writing for term 4. Or prompt was:m Write to describe one environmental problem and explain what people can do to reduce it's impact on the planet. I did not finish it. But in the coments, you could give me some ideas on how to improve my explanations. Here it is:

How to deal with pollution If you don’t no what pollution is it is when plastic gets into our waters. Pollution is really bad for the environmentle because it kills all of our fish that we eat so soon we will have no fish in the sea and that would be really bad for the environment. I am her to help you find some solutions for pollution  I have three solutions. The first solution that i have today is to stop using plastic bags you can use the cotton bags. The cotton bags are only one or two dollars. Having a cotton bags is good to have because it is reusable and you will not have to buy another bag. The second solution  that I have for you today is to stop throwing all of your rudish into the sea because that is what: is causing the pollution. The last but not least solution that I have for you today is

Greats & Grands Day

Kia ora                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Tomorrow is Greats & Grands Day. We have been super busy writing explanations & poems for the Greats & Grands Day.  I have written an explanation about sore back and how grandparents can cope.

Beginning	Title Copy your explanation title here.	How Grandparents Cope with a Sore Back
	1st paragraph Define and describe what you are explaining.	A grandparent is a person who is old enough for their baby to have a baby. When people start to get old different parts of their bodies start to get worn out and they can no longer do what they could do before. This is called aging and it causes many problems. One aging problem that a grandparent may have to deal with is a sore back.

Middle	2nd paragraph Write about one thing you can do to cope with a sore back	One thing that a grandparent can do to cope with a sore back is to stretch when you get in to bed and out of bed. This will get their muscles warmed up.
	3rd paragraph Write about a second thing you can do to cope with having a sore back	A second thing they can do is to go and get a massage. I have not had a massage before, but my mum has and before she got her massage her back was really sore. After she had her massage she felt really good so a massage might work for a grandparent with a sore back.
	4th paragraph Write about a third thing you can do to cope with a sore back	A third thing that a grandparent could do is to take a special sort of medicine and maybe get a special cream for their back.
End	5th paragraph Wind up your writing.	I think that any grandparent could try one of the things that I have suggested because I think that one of these might be helpful.